I have no problem with the intro. :D well perhaps you really can improve it, but I liked the whole song!
especially the part at 1:38 :D 4.5 stars!
the intro is just a matter of choice, but I personally didn't like it too.. Yes, I could improve this song more but this is as far as I can get with this track. I'll implement new ideas in further tracks.
I personally think the bass at 0.17s should have some delay effect. That would be cool. :D
and you can add some stutter effect on the speech as well. or at least make the last word 'function' delay, so it will goes like "Function...function....function..........." :D
That is all from me. :D I am no music expert, but I really think these effects could have boost your music so much. Overall, this is a decent music production. I'd give 4 stars. :D
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Thanks for your feedback :) I agree with what you've said and have changed some things and have uploaded a new version which I hope is an improvement along the lines of what you suggested! Let me know what you think!
Could have been improved
I personally think that you should add more beat, like that one at 0.26s and perhaps extend this music to longer duration of time, because I do think it has catchy tune.
Other than that, I really enjoy it. :) I'd give this a three and a half stars. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for the review :) I might make an extended version that is more beat heavy in the future :)
WOw nice remix :D
I want to know what vsts did you used for this music. if you may inbox me thanks!
Used Sylenth1 and NI Massive. The drums are from Vengeance Clubsounds & Essential House.
1.05 i liked this part
there is very creative effort in using the voice haha sorry aint detailed enough but this is overall a decent works! bravo!
Thanks, unidentified! It's a privilege to have you comment on my audio. Looking forward to future music by you!
congratulations for being second top song in newgrounds :D
0.10 woah kinda reminded me of the old SNES game. :D and also nice arp introduction at 1.15 I'd give this a four star rating!
Hey @MysteriousPPresence .
I agree with those previous respond before. But, I am okay with this song being 'drumless'. My advice is that the starting of the guitar at 1.05 can be done better with a soft volume start. :)
Hey, why not listen to my song too? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/671716 it has the same genre as this song too.
Hey, thanks for the feedback, glad you "half-liked" it ! ^^
I'll check your song ! ;)
I liked the lyrics, it really went along well. Other than that, I am not familiar with this kind of genre. After all, I am not a music expert. :P But I very much agree with @Paranoidhumanoise. :)
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